When we fool one another, no reason to blame,
and we don't care, the matters are just all the same.
When the right is not right and like left, being left,
no achievement is valued, and life is a theft.
Ask the child what it thinks about so being fit,
as to mother and father it shows passion lit.
It will reason, and say, that is so because one
never gets an attention for what one has done.
Ask the Lord, and He says, like the child says, it is,
and moreover, no petulance it is like this.
And no morale is given in this ending verse.
And the morale is happy from it to disperse.
Nice sound and happy morale at the end.
ReplyDeleteGreat use of rhythm and rhyme. I would love to hear this being read - the chimes and almost-repetitions work so well. Thank you for joining us.
ReplyDeleteI like the rhyme too and the idea of no moral necessary, just sharing happiness :)
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