Exam

There is no way a child call
shall be heard in the wild mall.
If I cannot be just self
among floortake and giftshelf

I should firmly find my way
to that door and approach day
so that I, looking backwards,
honour life for the records.

7 comments:

  1. Where are you from, Vaccinius? Brave to write in a foreign language. I admire your good attitude.

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  2. This makes me think of graduation from school. It's like a mystery or riddle

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  4. I hope the child's call is heard and we find our way. Thank you for linking, Vaccinius!

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  5. May every child find his way properly

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  6. Yeah.. live well for no regrets later. Nice use of the form.

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  7. Sadly, this reminded me of the children who perished in the Russian? mall fire last week. Their panic and fear and screams were heard by many.......and resonate still though they are gone.

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